Monday, September 5, 2016

W.A.L.T research and write information about our Country!

Description: we are research our country and putting it on our,slides.
  Evaluation: Green traget
Feedback:That is amazing because you put full stops and a lot of information about Greece 
Feed forward:Maybe a little more Sentence about Greece. And maybe more photo on slides .

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora I really like how dedicated you were to finding information about your country. Maybe next time you could make sure your writing made sense by slowing down and proofreading it thoroughly. Ngā Mihi